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初绿
一点点,
你冒出来了!
眼睛还没有睁开,
心情还在那梦里。
晨间的风,
带着丝丝的寒意,
抚在你的小脸上,
羡慕着你那细肤嫩肌,
鸟儿也来了,
看着你的出现,
在枝头上那么惊喜,
他叫起来,
想让伴侣也来这里。
和她一起来看,
这春的奇迹!
人也来了,
来到你跟前静静站立,
他不等谁,
只是想闻闻你带来的春的气息!
First green
Little by little,
you show up in the branch above a stream,
with eyes still closed,
and thoughts still in your dream.
There comes the morning breeze,
so chilly and careless,
touching your face,
and admiring its tenderness.
There comes a bird,
happy to see you on the branch,
calling out to his partner,
hoping to enjoy the miracle with her on the ranch.
There comes a guy,
standing there by himself like a gent,
waiting for nobody,
only wanting to smell you the spring scent.
据我知道,英文表达,少用感叹号(英文较为含蓄,理性);简体中文,感叹号多(很多不能说,不可说,于是),繁体中文,少,感情在文字中(李敖先生除外);法语,感叹号多;鸟语,不等,Bluejay/乌鸦/海鸥等,一般感叹号多,其他鸟儿除了繁殖期,少;风语,分地方,北美,感叹号多,中国江南,无感叹号,省略号多,你 呀。。。。。。,对的,风说人话,人说风话。
有研究吧?:)
如果 英文后面不要那么多的感叹号 更好
俺以为