Ayi,
I don't know that you already come back. Thank you very much to read my peoms and give such a good comments. Your words always encourage me to keep doing things.Take care.
benwen2005-09-22 10:50:14
Huilang,
I am busy but always find time to enjoy your poem. Very good !!
《凉秋》里没有清冷,也没有萧条,却是一幅充满动感的秋天风景彩画。画里秋水微寒,红叶黄叶在风里且歌且舞,一如诗人的漫不经心。如此自然天成、无意无心的景致,却恰恰是秋景的极美。
山里的秋色
在无人的世界里
自生自美
引我越走越远
我抬头望云
看树叶飘飞
一路走过这山
我在秋天独行
秋意正合我的心意
我一路走过
风景一路延伸
自然美景打动诗人,诗人不知不觉陶醉其中而后又其为风景的一部份。不管诗人走到哪里,脚下都是一路的美景;不管诗人想到哪里,周围的景致都是为了诗人而生。只分不清这美景到底是秋景还是诗人的心境了。秋色和诗人的心境一样,在无人的世界自生自美,且相伴相生相衬,在诗里一路延伸……
I will, Ayi, and thank you very much for your supporting over years.
You should keep writing and I am sure your tolent will pay off !
寒枝:
谢谢你的美言。秋天是我比较偏爱的季节,所以更多地写些自然景观和我对这些风景的感觉。和自然交流,会让人心情愉悦。
Ayi,
I don't know that you already come back. Thank you very much to read my peoms and give such a good comments. Your words always encourage me to keep doing things.Take care.
I am busy but always find time to enjoy your poem. Very good !!
秋意正合我的心意
我一路走过
风景一路延伸
美得言语无法形容的诗句.