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菜鸟初登诗坛 多谢指教 [忆秦娥-------秋思寄亡友]

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                                    忆秦娥-------秋思寄亡友


                      


                                          秋风至,


                                          花残叶落南飞雁.


                                          南飞雁,


                                          行行秋壮,


                                          倍添愁怅.


 


                                         天涯咫尺何时见,


                                         绵绵秋雨阴阳阻.


                                         阴阳阻,


                                         别离凄楚,


                                         诉说无处.


 


    

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