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For my act with my trainer
And my partner Eleanor,
The elephant .
I was stretching my wings,
I’m a parakeet, you know,
Just about to fly through
The drawn curtains
When I smelled the smoke,
And the screams started.
In a matter of seconds
The tent was aflame.
The heat was intense
As if we were in an oven.
People were rushing around
Screaming for help
With no intention
To help others,
Trapped like everyone else.
As I gazed around
At the faces
Of panic-stricken people
I spotted a gap in the roof,
Big enough for me to
Fly through.
I knew if I did
I would have to leave my trainer
Whom I’ve been
So loyal to
And all my friends
Trapped within their cages
Gazing at me
Panic in their eyes.
I wanted to help them.
But how could I?
I was but only a circus bird
Just as helpless as the rest
As I gathered up
My strength
Just about to fly away,
I caught a glimpse of Eleanor
Surrounded by fire .
Goodbye ole friend
I thought in my head
As I flew through
The gap,
Disappearing
Into the smoke .
小M(11岁)
20111009
人家这是所谓的自创朦胧诗。
这首诗的前提是:有个马戏团失火了,她把自己想像为马戏团中的一只鸟,在失火的时候,她飞走了,活了下来。。。
写得这么难,俺都看不懂了,,,