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It sounds to me that "P" paused not long enough. 
 
 
来源: beautifulwind 于 2012-04-04 07:43:30 
 

Mr.James Scott has a garage in Silbury and now he has just bought another garage in Pinhurst. Pinhurst is only five miles from Silbury, but Mr. Scott cannot get a telephone for his new garage, so he has just bought twelve pigeons. Yesterday, a pigeon carried the first message from Pinhurst to Silbury. The bird covered the distance in three minutes. Up to now, Mr.Scott has sent a great many requests for spare parts and other urgent messages from one garage to the other. In this way, he has begun his own private telephone service.

注意一下/ei/的发音。似乎老毛病又犯了。

g 的·发音应该稍微卷舌。

r你似乎忘卷舌了。
three 发的不清楚。

n in own 似乎没听到。

来源: tingfeng 于 2012-04-04 10:09:15 
 

Mr.James Scott has a garage in Silbury and now he has just bought another garage in Pinhurst. Pinhurst is only five miles from Silbury, but Mr. Scott cannot get a telephone for his new garage, so he has just bought twelve pigeons. Yesterday, a pigeon carried the first message from Pinhurst to Silbury. The bird covered the distance in three minutes. Up to now, Mr.Scott has sent a great many requests for spare parts and other urgent messages from one garage to the other. In this way, he has begun his own private telephone service.

only, o 发得再慢一点

pigeons, /i/ 应该是短音

three, th不到位

requests, prounanced like "requestis" it should be /riqests/

own, sounds like /old/

来源: bingli 于 2012-04-04 14:16:39 
 
from是不是应该只发成一个音节？还有最后一句“he has begun his own private telephone service”

private 后面应是upside down e,听起来象是ei,service也是同样的问题。

来源: 非文学青年 于 2012-04-04 14:25:00 
 

bird发得真好听！
Mr.James Scott has a garage in Silbury and now he has just bought another garage in Pinhurst. Pinhurst is only five miles from Silbury, but Mr. Scott cannot get a telephone for his new garage, so he has just bought twelve pigeons. Yesterday, a pigeon carried the first message from Pinhurst to Silbury. The bird covered the distance in three minutes. Up to now, Mr.Scott has sent a great many requests for spare parts and other urgent messages from one garage to the other. In this way, he has begun his own private telephone service.

来源: 同学小薇 于 2012-04-04 19:18:22

同意楼上同学们提的