中国俗话讲：‘锣鼓’听音‘啊！红袖飘香还添乱， 听着名字，是个“角儿” 的意思了. 看着文学城诗坛上下的，时不时的红袖里就抖出了诗的词的。那浪漫地气息，不令人窒息，不胡思乱想，也说明精力是集中得十分可以的。然而读着这首诗， 这感觉就更豁然地苍凉起来。。。

跃入眼帘的：‘风沙' ’落日‘ ‘大漠’ 广袤， 与苍狼的孤独，一种西部的凄凉的美感，犹如’寒风‘中 悠远地’长啸‘ 撕开冷月下的夜幕. 画面里竟是：‘寒风冷月’ 与 ’沙浪孤烟‘ ； 到了'西行与万里戈壁’ 与 ‘破霜而出’ ‘搏击鹰蟒’ 武打动作， 就会想到一些动作的设计。而画面的处理，在第一段的第三句就交代了：‘生存’；‘挣扎’，‘拼搏’，‘出征’ ‘制胜’， 穿插些 ‘生衍’的细节，加上柔化些‘血性’的镜头，看来就一切都妥了。剩下的只是物色：带着‘不愈的伤’ 的 我们的‘大漠苍狼’ 的主角了。。电影或诗歌，确实是需要些‘苍狼’派的。。。

诗， 好， 意境，更‘苍’。读到这，想到这会儿，柔柔红袖，飘香添乱的‘男儿气概’ 就水落石出，‘诗人’ 的本质终于得以把握住了！

一语评说。

【Chinese Poetry 】 A Close Reading，

In this poem, artistic elements, we seen in images, actions, even the color and the sounds are vividly well described. 'Heroic', 'Solitary', 'West scenes' are main themes in the picture that the poet draw for us.

Story starts from a stormy day on a desert area in the west areas, where readers and viewers can see the setting sun, bloody, and gold, against the yellowish sea of sand, endless, and harsh. So the main character, a ordinary looking, grey, maybe, little bit of dark, a lone wolf, howling in a cold moonlit night deep in the mountains.

Differed from those doggies in arms of the rich-ladies or a sad man sitting at the bar or in the fancy car, the 'Wolf' is the hero in the nature; he had scars in his face, and all the battles fought for food, and his children, and his 'tribes' in 'fighting' with other kinds of animals, including human? Maybe.

Most interestingly, the what we called 'personification' is used just oppositely to draw a picture of the ‘Hero': A lonely Wolf, seemingly a unique character in this powerful poem.

"Calls from the wild" and numerous stories and even movie had tried in depicting the "heroism' of the wolves. they run, chase, bite, and howl in the cold wind under the moon in deep mountains. All these actions we saw and heard, and even his colors, and colors of the sky in a setting sun in distance desert of the west, vivid and living.



Then fall in deep thinking of the relations with animals and the total significance of the environment, which we human and other creatures to live in. Maybe you might wanna click again!

Note: Lakeshore, a little soldier