个人资料
作舟诗集
作舟诗集
给我悄悄话
  • 博客访问：
正文

::::::::::IF:::::::::::::

(2006-05-16 19:26:43) 下一个

if i live

closely enough

i can learn

something new

in each song

. . .

if i sing

like that

bird in the tree

i can learn

something new

about love

each day

. . .

if i can

keep

going at

it

i might find

something

new about

you

:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::2006::::::::::::::::::::::::z z:::::::::::::::::::

[ 打印 ]
[ 加入书签 ]
阅读 () ┆ 评论 (11)
评论
作舟诗集 2006-05-17 19:00:45 回复 悄悄话 影云, 别说自己"卖瓜," “幺喝”还是需要地！
：））
y.y. 2006-05-17 18:47:13 回复 悄悄话 “老泰”值得一读，还是“米勒爷”的“偶像呢：)
尽管人们说他过时了，那是因为很多人用情诗的角度来读 。。。实际上它们是灵性
的诗篇。。。说实话，读者还得有一定的精神境界[呀，不是影婆卖瓜了吗]

:)
作舟诗集 2006-05-17 18:41:23 回复 悄悄话 没怎么读过"老泰"的东西.....
但,你让我感到荣幸了:)-----------谢谢
y.y. 2006-05-17 18:37:58 回复 悄悄话 in 吉檀珈历 里的诗篇。。。
y.y. 2006-05-17 18:37:29 回复 悄悄话 其实这首诗歌，让我觉得很有泰戈尔的诗的心境。。。尤其在里的诗篇。。。
作舟诗集 2006-05-17 18:15:54 回复 悄悄话 影云,你说的极是!!
你阅读的角度很有"营养":)
y.y. 2006-05-17 18:08:39 回复 悄悄话 what exists in the poem is timeless

listening:
singing:
searching:
loving:
. . .

"something new" is part of being and has always been there
we open ourselves, and then open a window to see it, feel it . . .

i like the “internal accumulation” of feelings in the poem . . .leading to You . . . of course, this You is more than the you in how-are-you. . .
作舟诗集 2006-05-17 17:47:38 回复 悄悄话 hi yy::::::::::::::
you can read "timelessness" out of that???
:)
y.y. 2006-05-17 13:50:05 回复 悄悄话 timeless . . .

:)
作舟诗集 2006-05-17 10:43:42 回复 悄悄话 hi::::zf:::::::thanx:::::::
z.f. 2006-05-17 08:38:47 回复 悄悄话 ::::::::::::::simple:::nice:::sweet:::loving::::::::::::::

:::::::::::::::::::::通::::::::::::透:::::::::::::::::::::

something new...
登录后才可评论.