ODE TO FIREFLIES
Night meadows
The uncharted
Darkness of yearning
Shadows
All fires out
Gone! Except
Your little
Engines
Of love
Declaring
Announcing--
The biggest
Soul
In the smallest
Chest
Did I say "soul?"
That formless
Entity
Of light[?]
O, you lovers
Of pyralis fire!
Unflaggingly
Protesting
A fallible
G o d
Whose career
Is to disbelieve
To unsanction
Your short-
Lived affair
For you put humans
To shame
Those who huddle
To artificial fire
The unlit souls
Conspire
Nothing curbs
The inaudible
But determined
Voice
From your small
Luminous hearts
Nothing!
Not even
The massive death
Of stars
In the belly
Of blind
Night!
You see, it's easy
To snuff
The sap & spark
Out of a human heart
Who lives in a herd
Fooled
By his Lord
I've seen power &
Violence
In cold blood
I've seen fake
Emotions stirred
By high voltage
Wire, but
None can compare
To your cool
Flare and
A perfect love
Consumed
By each other's
Fire!
:june '05
art by: Sheila Sullivan
:))
我们的路确是比较曲折的!
但,只要"大方向"找对了,空气就会越来越新鲜!
:)
long way to go :)
don't worry about that:)
we are always looking for "betterness" in the field of words too:)
your attitude is wonderful!
wait for yours:)
you are welcome:)
:)
like it!!
in some ways, this poem needs more "fill-ins," it seems....
i am trying to translate it myself too :)
thanx for your nice version!
你看,生命之汁
易干
心灵的火花
易灭
那些心灵
随波逐流
被“神”愚弄
我见过冷血的权威
与暴力
也见过高压线缆
激发的
虚情假意
但没有什么
能与你的冷光相比
两族火花
碰撞
完美的
爱!
nice translation!!!
"汁液" and "搅拌" would not be my first choice though....
like the pic you chose for it in your blog!
thanks!
rc,
seems like you did some research :)
you call them "romantic beasts"?? reminds me of a film, "Sexy Beasts" :)
zf,
the word "pyralis" is also a species of firefly, i think....hope i spelled it right....
"immortal fire" is great! :)
pyralis: immortal fire in Greek. Thanks again, y.y.
I’d like to take “pyralis” as “immortal” since it means immortal of fire in Greek if I am going to revise my translation.
Interesting to know that, "Fireflies are very romantic beasts, because their whole adult life is spent courting. There are hundreds of different firefly species, each using a different flash code for identification. Male and female flash patterns also differ.." :))
夜的草原
渴望的影
未知的黑暗
所有的火
已灭!除了
你小小的
爱的引擎
告知
宣布 - - -
最小胸膛里
最大的
灵魂
我说了“灵魂”?
光无形的
个体?
阿 ,萤火
的仰慕者们!
不招摇的
抗议
脆弱的
上 帝
他的职业
不过是怀疑
不认可
你短暂的
爱情故事
因你令人类
蒙羞
那些涌向
人为的火
黑暗中的灵魂
密谋
没有什么
约束
来自你细小
光亮的心
的声音:
微弱
却坚定!
甚至不是
群星于盲夜
腹部的
集体
死亡
你看,人心
的汁液易干
火花易灭
那些心灵
随波逐流
被“神”愚弄
我见过冷血的权威
与暴力
也见过高压线缆
搅拌的
虚情假意
无人能与
你的冷光相比
两族火花碰撞
完美的
爱!
thank you! it is very inspiring, this little insects!!
Forgot the note:
Fireflies are normally 10-14 mm in size, and they produce a green or yellow light to appeal to their mates at night.
True:
"Those who huddle
To artificial fire
The unlit souls
Conspire "
i have been "cooking" it on slow fire :)
take ur time!!
love it!!!
let me slowly "sipping" it:)