Sister Plum
---sky or nightmares?
I restored our moon
---book or dog?
I set the wintry night afire
---smiles or thunderbolt?
I corrected trees’ direction
---snow or abstraction?
I woke up our oceanic angel
---love or volcano?
I consumed your flame
---clouds or dragonroot?
I promised the wind
to take you to a joyous ride
good to see you here! :)
hard to say if a poem is "realistic" or "abstract"... is Love realistic or abstract??
a poem is a piece of art which should at least offer us a new way of seeing or thinking...
what is art? you know what i mean?
hope to see you here more often!!!
cheers!
YY suggested me to come here. Long time no see. Just a short Hi. Saw your short prose in ZhouLang forum, good writing, much like Mr.Lee.:))
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Is this one an abstract poem to match the abstract painting? (or all poems are abstract?):))
you are soooooooooooooooooo welcome :)
thank you for your support for my blog!!! since i borrowed your design...:)
beautiful!!! i read it and could not breathe ....
thaaaaaaaaannnnnkk you so much for sharing :)